Wanna give me feedback on the "The Crossroads of Fate" trailer?

[serano9]

Hey that title worked for Gregpak, hopefully it works for me. FEEDBACK is good. Disclaimer- It's only a Promo so it won't explain the plot. Load time might take a sec. I guess that's it for now. We are in A.D.R sessions right now to have our dialog ready for the final trailer.

www.thecrossroadsoffate.com

[Bryan]

Nice. I loved the use of colors, very pleasing visually!

What'd you shoot this with? DVX-100?

[serano9]

Sony DSR-500 Wide Screen. Thanks for the review!

Matt

[Zebo]

Serano9,

Very nice job. I particularly enjoyed the opening scenery shots with voiceover. I think it nicely hooks the viewer's interest without giving too much away. The female narrator is very effective -- managing to sound sensual, vulnerable and yet resolved at the same time.
Very creepy beginning. I particulary enjoy the shot of the girl bathed in blued light walking down what appears to be an aisle in a very unsettling church.
One criticism -- If I could pick one way to improve the promo, I would recommend removing the shot where the tough-looking hombre spins and fires a handgun. To me this shot sticks out like a sore thumb -- looking laughable, rather than intense and thrilling. His spin is slow and awkward, and he appears to fire his gun before his head rotates to his target.
Overall, the promo looks fantastic. I look forward to one day hopefully seeing the entire movie.